How does this sound for an opening paragraph?
This is my introduction and thesis for my paper about the weaknesses of the Articles of Confederation. The Articles of Confederation was the first governing document of The United States of America. Ratified in 1781, it created the structure of government until the current Constitution was ratified in 1887. It was replaced because of the weak central government it produced; Congress couldn’t levy taxes, regulate commerce, or coin money, among other things. The Constitution was an attempt to remedy these problems and create a more stable central government. What should i add to make my thesis stronger?
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sound good to me
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take out 4 th sentence leave that for the second paragraph
