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The military draft has contributed a lot to the United State of America during the World War 2. During the World War 2, the congress has invented a technique which was call the military draft which was a technique that allowed adults between the age of 18-24 to go to the military to help their country when needed. Even though they were force to serve their country, it was a benefit for the soldiers too. It helped them to earn lots money and becoming more mature in life. The military draft had helped those soldiers to learn something handy that would help them later in life and it would help those people to learn some respect for those solider who served and fought the country. If we bring back the military draft it would be a benefit for the country and a benefit for the soldiers and then we can finally put a stop to Iraq.
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Congress didn't invent the draft. Napoleon came up with conscription, which is a draft.
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Please state your age or grade level so we can have a better idea of the amount of help to provide. If you are a college student, that is unacceptable. If you are in second grade, that is very good. Think about how you define the word "benefit." You have used benefit and help several times and many of us would disagree with your usage.
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I would say it while eating one of Bojangles famous Chicken Biscuits.
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Then, it was considered an honor to get called. People actually committed suicide if they couldn't serve. Now, you have sniveling, whining cowards who want to enjoy the freedoms and liberties of this country but do not want to help protect them. But to answer your question, what grade are you in? This would help.
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The military draft contributed a considerable amount to the united states of America during ww2. During ww2 congress instated a drafting method which is called the military draft. This technique requires adults between the ages of 18-24 to join the military to help their country when in need. The draft has other advantages, it helps soldiers earn a good sum of money and helps them mature in life. The Draft also helps soldiers learn something handy that would help later in life such as..... Just a little note on my own here. The draft is still active, every one has to sign up for it when they turn 18 and the only reason its not active is because there are enough people joining the military freely. If military recruitment went way down during 911 they would have probably started drafting. Well they would have met a hell of a fight but they probably would have tried it. Another thing, i really hope you dont believe that about the draft.
